Night came tapping at my door,
But I with book heard not a sound;
It entered on its own accord,
Trespassing on my private ground.
Night crept about my house with ease
And darkened everything from sight,
’Til through my study’s door it squeezed
And skirted past my candle’s light.
I did not peer to watch its plight
Across my shelves and down my wall;
I know not if it bade goodnight;
I heard not if it spoke at all.
With book aside I pondered why
That one so strong as dark of night,
Who snuffs the life from day’s bright light,
Could not put out my candle light.
Insight
I wrote this whimsical poem many years ago when I was at college and studying the classics in literature. I rarely write rhyming poems, but this one came to me out of the blue, so I jotted it down with no changes. I imagined the protagonist as a child in a long ago era, observing the coming of night.
I loved it. Not everyone can do classic literature well, but you captured it perfectly.
Thank you. I am always surprised when I read my writing from 30 or more years ago and find something I like. This one still pleases me.
Thank you for the like. 😊
Beautiful!!– truly one of your best, sir!! Happy New Year!! 👍😊
Thank you for the like. Although I’m somewhat late arriving with this reply, I hope you have a Happy New Year, too. 😊